Nyob zoo Tub Soj Ntsuam,
Tej zaum koj totaub yuam kev lawm. Hais txog kev sau paj huam ces sawv daws yeej nyias txawj sau nyias yam. Kuv tsis yog kws sau paj huam
tab sis yog sau no tej zaum tib neeg yuav nyiam thiab. Kuv lam muab ib ob zaj los ua piv txwv rau koj tau saib. Cov phooj ywg nyob sab nraud los
kom nrog saib thiab ho nrog kho. Kuv li tsis tau muab publish li koj tab sis ntau tshaj koj li 3 npaug, thiab yog muab luam ua phau ntshe yuav tuab
txog 300 page. Koj lam saib zaj no kuv sau teb nraug seem tab sis kuv txiav txim siab tsis muab tso tawm vim kuv tseem xav soj ntxiv seb nraug seem lawv puas ua raws li lawv hais tso kuv mam tso tawm no.
Teb nraug seem
10/7/07
ntawm no mus yog lus txhiaj txhais
yuav thov hais rau yawg lor nruas
uas tau muas tua npe vaj txhim
nws tau tsim koom ua ib npoj
yog tus coj ntawm pab nraug seem
twb tau peem tshaj xov rau hmoob
kom hnov thoob tias lawv yuav pib
hnub xiab ib ntawm lub xyoo tshiab
lub paj tsiab yuav los tom ntej
tshaj rau nej kom sawv daws hnov
vim rau qhov cov txiv nraug laus
tseg tsis taus lawv cov nkauj mog
nyob tim nplog tus twg deev thoob
yuav lawm coob ntau tshaj txhiab leej
cov txiv neej nraug seem pab npoj
thiaj ua ntsoj tsis nrog muaj sev
siab tsis ntev nyiaj ntxeem tsis tau
lawv thiaj npau rau hmoob txhua leej
cov txiv neej nyob ntuj hnub poob
kom paub thoob tias lawv tsis xyeej
yog tseem pheej rov mus tim nplog
tham nkauj mog yuav nyuj sib nraus
yuav mag faus nplaig yuav lo av
kuv thiaj xav muab qhub li nov
peb twb hnov nraug seem tau tshaj
kom ceev faj tig saib qab hau
leej hlob yau kom peb to tsib
vim lawv khib lawv thiaj li qhoob
yog hnov thoob lawm ces txhob ua
ho tig sua rau pab nraug seem
nej yog leem ntawm nplog cob tsib
nej yuav pib txov nej tsev neeg
vim nej ntseeg lwm haiv ntxias haub
yam tus kuv phem raws nqaij rau luag
tam ntsoj ntsuag tsis txawj tu siab
lub tseem ntsiab nej tsis tau noj
luag lam yoj pob txha hom*
ua nplog qhev qhia hmoob nplog tua
txawj tsis txhua twb paub tsis thoob
peb me hmoob thiaj nyob txom nyem
nplog muab lem twb hais tsis sawv
leej twg tawv ces ploj ntsiag moo
tsis zoo nroo tham qhia leej twg
me phooj ywg koj tsis yog txhim
ntshai av lim thiaj qhia xeem cuav
txiv nraug suav koj yog toj xeem
hos nraug seem ces lam tua npe
tau ua ke tham ces paub suab
kuv thiaj muab hais raws qhov tseeb
noob tooj xeeb koj yog xeem lauj
cov poj nrauj kuj tseem tshuav coob
tej ntxhais hmoob tseem tshuav ntau tshaj
ntxhais hmoob yaj hmoob thoj hmoob muas
tsev npog luas nyob txhua lub roob
tej zos hmoob nyob txhua lub xeev
puav leej seev tuaj nrog nej nyob
zos tsib ob ntawm ko xwb ne
txav ze ze rub siab ntev ntev
yuav ua sev tsawg tus los tau
ua niam yau los lawv yeej kam
txhob phiv vam rau cov mus deb
vim thaj teb lawv tsis xav dob
tsis xav nyob ua neeg txom siab
txog paj tsiab tsis muaj tsoos hnav
lawv thiaj xav mus yuav txiv laus
ntoo pob caus xwb los lam khaws
laus tshaj yawg los kuj kav liam
yog lawv nyiam ces txhob tav kev
twg npab ntev ces ua twg nyab
mus noj qab nyob ntuj sab ub
tseem tig hlub cov nyob tom qab
tsev khaub hlab los pab nej hloov
txhob looj koov rau hmoob mes kas
nyiaj daus las thiaj li ntws los os cov nraug seem.
Tub Soj Ntsuam, on Sep 27 2008, 11:24 PM, said:
Phooj ywg tswv yim:
"Kuv ntsia koj cov sentence sib dhos mas hais tsis muaj education. Nws yog lus xam khib xwb!!
Koj hais tsis muaj beat...tsis smooth...daig los daig...muab luag tej lus tig rov hais kom
xu doj xu das!!! I would like to see one best poem from you. Yog hais tsis tau ces tej zaum
muab tswv yim hav nyom coj los siv ua ib ya daj ya dub xwb.....hehehehe"
